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Forever and Mine

7/10 Premise is very good, the plot has more holes than a strainer, the storyline is very short and rushed, grammar and spelling are in need of an edit, and the characters need a polish. Yet for all the flaws this is interesting and has a pull to it. It reminds me of 'She's one of the Boys', so if you liked that then you might enjoy this one.

Good luck and good reading.

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