@jENNIE68
8/10Great Premise and a good plot, though it has some odd holes. The storyline moves well and there are no time jumps or odd skips. These characters are grand, the foundation you built made it so easy to fall for Mikhail and then root for Ember when she was introduced.The grammar and spelling are good but as with the plot holes, an edit will fix them easily enough.
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Tales and What I Think of Them
Outros génerosWhat tales made the 10+/10 to what made the 8/10. These are the tales that made me cry, laugh, get mad, or just want to read them again and again. Hope you enjoy them as much as I have. Great life and Great reads to you all.
