And I'm done for now with editing NOT THE STORY, at least that's what I'm going to say. I fixed Killua's character a little, making him sassy more than cocky and making it so that he is smarter than how I was writing him, but I think I still want to keep the heavy emotions. If you think about it he's been keeping that stuff in for years and with anyone who bottles up emotions it all is bursting out like a volcano. As a person who does this I understand a little too much, but his emotions were going to burst at some point, so why not when he's in a foreign environment with no one he recognizes or loves while having the added stress of trying to find his way home.
Anyway, if you have any other criticism please dont be afraid to say something. I'm always open to constructive criticism, and as you can see I will take it seriously and may end up rewriting a bit of the story so it works better because I'm not always going to see the problems my story has. Thanks for your time and have a good day :)
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From Hunter to Hero (MHA X HXH)
FanfictionKillua is somehow transported into the MHA universe. Will he be able to find a way back home? Will he ever see Alluka and Gon ever again? Read to find out This story is so cringe, read at your own discretion but I am warning you that it is so cringe...
