This story is related from my another story based on balveer returns"kuch to hai Tere mere darmiya"I suggest you to read that story first to enjoy the suspense of the story.
This is a short story based on devanya's previous birth .
In the dark atmosphere of the drak lok where many of its native can be seen fighting savagely and many of them can be seen lying on the floor dead , Someone heavy footsteps can be seen approaching towards those barbarian.His eyes are red and looking forward with anger.He reaches near those barbarian and is going to move forward but someone put sword on his neck.He is still looking forward like a angry bull.He doesn't bother to look at the sword.
"KAAL KO MARNE KI KOSHISH KARNE WALA YA TO BAHUT VEER HOTA HAI YA PHIR MURKH"He said dangerously and then tilted his face towards his attacker and smirks evily.
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"Kaal ?Tumhe to kabhi drak lok me nhi dekha "asked the attacker.
"Aur ab se koi tumhe nhi dekh payega"Saying this he hold his neck from his left hand and hang him in the air while looking in forward direction toward the other Drak lok members. Kaal-"Kaal tum jaisa murkh nhi hai jo Jaikas ke swano(dogs) ke bhati rahe.Aur uske jootan per pale.Aur aapas me hi swano ki tarah lad kar mar jaye.Kaal singh hai.Aur singh swano ke jhund me nhi milta"
Saying this he throws that person.
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"Hume swan bulane ka sahas kaise kiya tumne"said one of the drak lok member.
Kaal -"Swan nhi to aur kya ho tum sab?Uss jaikas ke pichhe dum hilane wale swan.Wo jaikasparishakti ko pane ke baad aur bhi adhik shaktishali ban kar tum per sasan karega aur tum sab usski jai jai kar".
"Uski jai jai kar karna me hume koi anand nhi milta hai.Per jaikas hum sab se aadhik shaktishali hai.Aur hum chah kar bhi usse nhi hara pate"said one of them gritting his teeth angrily.
Kaal-"Murkh ho tum sab.Jaikas ko durbal nhi bana sakte to shaktishali bannee doge .Socho yadi parishakti ko pane me wo safal ho gaya to.Abhi bhi samay hai.Yadi Tum.sab ne usse rok diya to tumme se koi drak lok ka samrat hoga aur keval tumhari jai jai kar hogi. Everyone starts dreaming himself as a king . Kaal -"parantu tum sab se kuch bhi nhi hoga . Tumhe to pari shakti ka pta bhi nhi malum hoga kyuki tum sab ho to swan hi.Jaikas ke swan" Saying this he starts moving forward.
"tumse kisne kaha ki hume nhi pta"said one of them.He stops at his place and smirks. In pari look.
Natkhat pari-"Kitni saralta se Balveer ne parishakti ka pta lga liya Rani pari"
Baal pari-""Kisi ko sandeh bhi nhi hua ki Jisse wo sab kaal samajh rahe hai wo Balveer hai."
Rani pari-"Ha Baal pari, Balveer ka roop badalne ki yojna Bahut achchi thi.unhone apni budhhi ka bahut achha prayog kiya hai.Hum aasa karte hai ki wo jald ae jald pari shakti ko le kar surakshit aa jaye"
In drak lok
Balveer with other drak lok members reaches at the place where Ananya is present. Kaal-"Tum savdhani purwak parishakti ke aas pass ki suraksha ko jachne aage jao " He said pointing towards one of the member of his new made team.He takes a step forward but stops hearing Kaal's next word. Kaal-"Yadi ye jiwit wapas nhi aaya to phir tum jana" He said pointing toward another member.That person who was first going inside turns towards him and said-"khud ko singh keh rahe ho to tum hi pehle kyu nhi jaate.ya phir maut se bhaybhit ho""
Kaal -"Kaal khud maut ka bhi kaal hai" Saying this he move forward with his attitude. Drak lok native (in mind)-"Yadi ye wapas aa gya to hume yaha ki paristhiti ka pta chal jayega aur yadi nhi to Neel ratna ka ek davedar kam ho jayega"
He moves towards the Cave in which Ananya is kept .Ananya is sitting on the floor while resting her head on the cave wall, holding her mangalsutra,and is remembering her and Balveer's sweet memories.That time when she was the happiest person in the world.
Waqt le je aaya hume kahan Tum jami mai aashman
Saath nhi mera tera yahan Humari alag hai do duniya
Mai hu ab tere liye anjani HUMARI ADHURI KAHANI..
So How was the chapter? Kaal ki entry sochi thi kya kisi ne?
Personally I really liked the character of Kaal portrayed by Dev Joshi. His looks,his voice ,his way of dialogue delivery is very much impressive and really is giving a impression of dangerous villian.But sadly it ended soon and in incomplete manner. I hope Balveer returns restart ho jaye aur phir se wahi se Start ho jaha end hua tha . Really wanted to know what will happen to kaal in show.
