Hey, so
I'm gonna rewrite this book. It's gonna take a while to work out the plot and how to make this dumpster fire of a book into something g half decent but I'll try my best.
This book committed these TERRIBLE CRIMES:
No pacing
Made *ahem* 'certain characters' FAR too UwU
Rushing plot points that I didn't care about
No free time for fluff
WAY too much angst
No ideas for hangouts
Did I mention no pacing?
I altered the characters personalities way too much
Bad writing
Bad art. I'm just gonna say it
And finally, I made it when I was 12 so that probably explains the bad writing, pacing, and overall shitty-ness of this book.
Soooo yeah. Definitely go checkout the rewrite, never read this book again, and finally have a good day :)
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• "I'll help you" • Saiouma • HIATUS
RomancePERMANENT HIATUS Fuck it. I'm gonna make a saiouma book ⚠️ WARNINGS ⚠️ Self harm Angst Fluff SPOILERSSSS (I cannot do lemons I'm sorry ;-;) Swears All art is not mine unless stated otherwise Idk aaa The cover art was indeed made my me Trans!Shuich...
