ENTANGLED LOVE- A MishBir TALE (Discontinued)

CHAPTER 5

Hola peeps, I'm back with the new chapter of my story titled "ENTANGLED LOVE".

It's so disappointing to see the response for the story being decreased day by day. Should I continue this book? Today's the verdict day!You guys tell me what should I do now?
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I spend more than 2 hours to write a single chapter but the response isn't that great.

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Recap: Aditya was frustrated over Mishti's runaway. He was also sacred of his dark secret. Noor and Mishti built a strong sisterly bond between them. Mishti bagged a good job and Abir and Mishti had a heated argument when the truth is revealed that Abir's ex gf is a doppleganger of Mishti,Isha. Mishti was determined not to face Abir again while Abir is determined to win her apology.

Abir was so frustrated with his behaviour towards Mishti past weeks.He behaved so coldly with her. Now he is all ready to win her apology as he knew that he wasn't like that.
Meanwhile Mishti was hell annoyed with Abir and she was astonished why her mind was clouded with Abir today and why his words are affecting her but she shrugged away her thoughts when Noor came in with Aadhya telling her,

"Appi,Aadhya wants her Mumma...Here she goes!"

Aadhya extended her tiny arms towards Mishti crying as she really missed her mother's warmth now a day as Mishti got busy with her job.
Mishti rocked Aadhya singing a lullaby for her,her cries turned into wails as Mishti succeeded in consoling her crying baby.

At night,
Mishti gave a bath to Ahana and dressed her up in comfortable clothes and arranged her crib when she felt a small thing was thrown to her. She turned around and saw a piece of paper crushed,she took the paper and opened it and saw a packet of smiley ballons,when she is about to throw away the paper,she contemplated the idea of opening the note once which says,

"Oh please,Don't throw the note!
It's for you Mrs.Mishti.
The smiley ballons are meant for you!
For today's matter,I can't be able come in front of you because I can't meet my eyes.
I don't want to justify myself for my actions. But I want your apologies from the day we met.
From,
~You know Who.

Mishti frowned at the letter as she found out who did this and says,

"How one could seek forgiveness like this?
I won't leave this freckle face.
Koi apni naam ko aise bolte hain kya?
Potterhead freckle face! He can never become my friend,Friend toh kya kuch nahi banne dungi!PFF.

Mishti mumbled to herself ,crushed the paper more and threw the paper and the smiley balloons packet out of the window but the paper got caught by Abir who was standing just beneath the floor from her room. He caught the paper and opened the
paper excitedly expecting a reply from Mishti but he found nothing and then he said to himself,

"Abir beta,The damage was so bad. Paper ko bhi,Mishti ji ko bhi!
Aur Tu bhi Na,woh teri girlfriend hai kya ki tum usse answer expect Kar rahe ho!But mein bhi haar nahi maanoonga. I'm Abir Rajvansh!