uncontrolled fire [Lmk]

intro

Greetings.
I'm redoing this entire book because it sucked ass hole when I first made it last year and the grammar was awful, so I'm here to redeem myself.

so here we are

this might be terribly written but I'm here to make it better, I've changed guys I'm a better man I swear on my life UgH

The plot was sort of twisted, so its a little different from what it once was I guess. Scrapped a few characters, tried making it more dramatic, that sort of thing.

I don't know if I've improved my angst writing skills or some shit like that so I guess just judge me in the comments idk

This silly story contains ShadowPeach (they have my whole heart) and SpicyNoodles (whom also have my whole heart)

This story also contains:

Queers

Crusty Icky gay monkies

Gore(?)

Stinky bad words

Men

ABUSIVE PARENTS 😨

Pls click off if you don't like any of those

Anyways there's probably tons of mistakes here but hey this isn't twilight level shit, your here to read about sorta gay dorks and gay monkies

What do you expect

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Coming in from December of 2023 OK UPDATING THIS INTRO CARD A FEW MONTHS AFTER REWRITING THIS UHHH WARNING THIS FIC IS REALLY SHITTY AND THERES TONS OF LIKE PLOT MISTAKES SO DONT POINT IT OUT TO ME ITS GENUINELY SO EMBARRASSING AND I HATE LOOKING BACK ON THIS FIC IN GENERAL AND I DONT PLAN ON EDITING IT TO FIX PLOT HOLES OR ANYTHING SO SOME THINGS MIGHT NOT MAKE SENSE BUT THATS OK BECAUSE IM LITERALLY A TEENAGER WITH A HYPERFIXATION WHAT DO YOU EXPECT

To clear a few things!!

This fic is after season 3 (I THINK?)

Mei doesn't control the fire anymore (idk I just didn't include it this could've been a whole dragonfruit fic but nooooo)

Redson may be brutal to Mk in the first few chapters and then at the end it's like all fluffy and cute or something but that's because Redson was going through shit!!! Sorry that's a huge plot hole I didn't fix when I rewrote this!!

Redsons parents are fine 😼

I wrote Sun Wukong as a guy who isn't completely invincible like in jttw, he can't exactly die but he can still take damage and feel pain and everything you know

I'll add more to this if I need to but enjoy this stupid fic I rewrote during summer (my writings gotten better since I wrote this so erm beware)

In that one flashback where the guys were uh taking the fire OUT of red boy Wukong's dumbass fell flat on his face and fucked the process over so instead of the fire hitting ao lie it kind of just stayed with Redson? That doesn't make much sense now that I think about it but pretend it does!! I MIGHT rewrite this but as a whole new story on wattpad because I want to compare my writing from summer of 2023 to my writing now so I'm keeping this fic the way it is (sorry it sucks but it's your fault you clicked on it!! This is my book not yours so I get to decide!!)

(It's currently now February 2024, im rewriting this fic and its going BEAUTIFULLY SO PLS COME BACK WHEN ITS FINISHED I BEG OF YOU 😭😭😭😭😭😭)

Enjoy I guess??

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