lumity mini story rewrite

the little mermaid part 1

Every mermaid and merman were watching a concert
King alador sat in his sit

Edric came in and talked to the king

King alador: I'm excited to hear amity sing

Edric: she has the most beautiful voice

Edric swam to the stage and opened the clam and she wasn't there

King alador got mad

King: amity!

Amity pov
Me and Gus were looking at the sunken ship

Amity: come on gus don't be a gaby

Gus: I'm not a gaby

We swam inside and we see a little trident

Gus: what is that

Amity: i don't know but i think hunter will know

A shark tried to attack us we swam to the surface

We see hunter on a island

Amity: hi hunter what is this

Hunter grabbed it and put it in his hair

Hunter: it's a digglehopper humans use this to brush there hair

Gus handed hunter a brown item

Gus: what's this

Hunter: this is a snarlflat humans use this to make music

Amity: music

Gus: the concert was today

Amity: i have to go hunter thank you

Hunter: anytime

I swam back home and i saw my dad

King alador: where were you

Me and gus went out for a swim

Gus: we went to a sunken ship and a shark attacked us then we saw hunter and he said this is this and that is that

King alador: you went to the surface didn't you

Amity: why do you don't like the surface

King alador: you could be seen by humans

I swam off and went to my treasure cave.