lumity mini story rewrite

beauty and the beast part 1

Character list
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Luz (beast)
Amity (belle)
Alador  (maurice)
Hunter (gaston)
Gus    ( lefou)
Eda  ( Mrs pots)
Edric ( lumiere)
Steve ( clogsworth)
Lilith (enchantress)
King ( chip)
Raine (book store worker)

Once a upon a time there was a princess that  had a party for everyone in the town then there was a knock at the door the princess answered the door and the witch offered a rose for to have shelter from the cold

The princess threw the rose on the floor and turned her away

Then the witch turned into a enchantress

The princess tried to apologize it was too late the enchantress saw there was no love in her heart
She transformed the princess into a beast and placed a powerful spell on the castle and everyone that lived there
The beast stayed in her castle with a magic mirror  the rose was a enchanted rose if she could  learn to love another and earn her love in return by the last pedal fell
Then the spell would be broken if not she would be stuck as a beast forever

Amity pov
I was walking to the book shop
Everyone was saying hello to me i get to the book shop

Raine: hello Amity how are you

Amity: I'm doing good do you have any new books

Raine: no but you can reread the books

Amity: thank you have a great day

Raine: your welcome

I walk out of the store

Hunter pov
Me and gus go out hunting then i see amity

Hunter: I'm going to marry amity

Gus: the inventor daughter

Hunter: yes

I walked up to amity and grabbed her book

Hunter: hello amity

Amity: hello hunter give me my book

Hunter: how do you read this it has no pictures

Amity grabbed the book

Amity: some people use there imagination

Amity: bye hunter

I walk home and i see my dad working on his invention

Alador: i have to leave today

We walked outside and he put his invention on a cart behind the horse

Amity: be safe and i love you

Alador: what do you want me to bring you home

Amity: a rose

My dad left and i read my book in the house then i hear a knock at the door and i opened it and it was hunter

Hunter: hello amity

Amity: what do you want hunter

Hunter: i want you to marry me Amity picture this you will be in a cabin cooking and cleaning and we will have 3 boys and you will rub my feet

Amity: I'm sorry hunter i don't ever want to get married you

Hunter: come on Amity

I walked him to the door and i opened the door and he fell into the mud

I closed the door

Alador pov
I was riding my horse in the woods then a pack of wolves attacked me and i got away then i see a big castle and i walked up to it and i walked inside and i see a tea pot a candlestick and a clock

Edric: come and get warm

Steve: mistress will not like this

Eda: its fine do you want some tea

Alador: yes please

Then this little tea cup jumped on the table

King: hello my name is king

Alador: I'm on a walk

I walked outside and i saw roses

Alador: amity wanted a rose

I grabbed a rose

Then i hear a roar and a beast jumped in front of me

Luz: what are you doing with my roses

Alador: it's for my daughter

Luz: your a theft and your going to be my prisoner

She took me to the prison.