lumity mini story rewrite

the little mermaid part 2

Amity pov i was looking at my treasures and edric came in

Edric: why do you have these human things

Amity: it's my collection

Then i see lights coming from the hole outside of the cave and i see a ship on the water

Edric: where are you going Amity

I ignored edric and i climb the ship

Luz pov
Eda put together a birthday party on a boat

Eda: luz i made you a gift

Luz: what is it

She showed me a stature of me

King walked up to it

King: that is not a very good gift

Luz: thank you eda

Eda: you have to find a princess

Luz: i will i know there is a girl for me i have to find

Then there was a storm

Amity pov
The ship started to catch fire and the witch with gray hair got on the small boat and the little demon jumped on the boat

The girl fell into the water and i jumped and grabbed the girl and put her on the beach

Hunter came up to me

Amity: is she alive

Hunter checked the girls foot

Hunter: i can't make out a heartbeat

The girl was breathing

Amity: she is alive
I sang to her

Eda: luz where are you

Amity: we have to go

I jumped into the ocean

Luz pov
I woke up on the beach and eda and king found me

Eda: are you ok

Luz: i was saved by this girl she had a beautiful voice

King: we have to go

Luz: i will find her

Amity pov
I was dancing and swimming around my room
King alador came in and i put a flower in his hair

Amity: hello daddy

I left the room

Alador pov
Amity left the room

Alador: what's wrong with her

Emira: she's in love

Edric pov
I walked into the throne room and dad was holding a flower

Alador: who could the lucky mermaid be

Edric: hi dad

Alador: hi you been hiding something from me

Edric: hiding something

Alador: about Amity

Edric: i tried to stop her she fell in love with a human

Alador: what?!

Amity pov
Gus had a surprise for me in the treasure cave

Amity: can you tell me the surprise

Guz: nope

I saw a statue of luz

Amity: thank you it looks just like her