lumity mini story rewrite

beauty and the beast part 2

Amity pov
I was feeding the chickens then my dad's horse came back

Amity: where is my dad take me to him

The horse took me to a castle

I walked inside

Amity: dad where are you

I walked upstairs and i see him in a cage

Amity: dad!

I ran to the door and sat down

Amity: what happened

Alador: amity  you have to get out of here

Amity: I'm not leaving you

Alador: please go

Then i hear stomping

Luz: what are you doing here

Amity: who's there who are you

Luz: the mistress of this castle

Amity: i come for my father please let him out

Luz: your father is a theft and a trespasser

Amity: please i will do anything

Luz: there's nothing you can do he's my prisoner

Amity: take me instead

Luz: you would take his place

Alador: no Amity you don't know what your doing

Amity: if i did would you let him go

Luz: yes

Luz: you must promise to stay here forever

Amity: come into the light

She came closer to me

Her look shocked me

Alador: no Amity  i can't let you do this

Amity: you have my word

Luz: done

Alador: no Amity I'm old i lived my live

She grabbed him and took him outside and threw him in a carriage

Luz: take him to the village

She walked in and put me in the jail cell and locked it

Amity: you didn't let me say goodbye

I fell to my knees and cried

The candlestick walked up to the beast

Edric: mistress maybe we have her stay in a better room

Luz: fine Edric will take you to your room and don't go to the west wing and you will join me for dinner

She walked away

Edric: come on fallow me

I fallowed the candlestick and he showed me the room

Edric: I'm sorry for mistress she hasn't had anyone in the castle in a long time

Amity: i miss my father

Luz pov
I ran up the stairs to my room and i walked up to the rose

Then steve walked in

Steve: mistress dinner is ready

Luz: ok thank you Steve

I walked into the dining room and she wasn't there

Luz: where is she

Edric: give her time and she will come

Steve: she's not coming