Steven Can't Take Constructive Criticism

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Steven: Owen, check out this story I wrote!

Owen: Sure, I guess. *reads Steven's story about a man in love with a woman*

Steven: Well?

Owen: Its okay, but I see a lot of grammar errors. The plot isn't fully developed, and its not my type of story. I feel that its too cheesy.

Steven: If you're gonna be rude, then you should keep quiet.

Owen: Dude, I was just offering my honest opinion! I wasn't being malicious or anything.

Claire: Facts! Not everyone is gonna like your story, Steven!

Me: Everyone has their own mindset!

Steven: I worked so hard on it, and Owen has to be rude. I'm gonna go for a walk. *walks out*

Iris: Don't you want to put your coat on? *shakes her head*





This story was written on Thursday, December 8th, 2022.

A/N Steven got offended when Owen offered him constructive criticism! He took it personal! Owen just isn't into love stories! He was just offering his honest opinion! Don't be a silent reader. Please leave feedback. Thanks.

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