Evelyn Ziegler (a dance moms fan fic)

S2 ep 20: guess whos back

"girls let's go!" Abby says as we walk in for pyramid
"alright, we went to starbound we proved that you are national champions once again it's much much much more fun to win ladies alright now let's talk about this week we are headed" Abby says and then Jill walks in

Um what??

"hi everyone." Jill says and i am shocked. Maddie looks at me with the same face I have.
"Abby can i talk to you?" Jill asks
"Jill, you know what i'm right in the middle of the pyramid you know how this works." Abby says

"i do know how this works i made a mistake going to Candy Apples you guys know that." Jill says.

A huge mistake

"it was a mistake and i would really like for you to find spot for Kendall on this team like you did once before." Jill says.
"Jill i don't have time for this today" Abby says
"i understand that." Jill says
"i have solos i have a group we have a competition this weekend." Abby says

"i wanna be there with you i think Kendall could fit right in this group she did it once before she can do it again." Jill says and Abby makes a shocked face at all of us.
"you are off your rocker."Abby says and i look to Chloe and we both try not to laugh
"all i want is for what's best for Kendall." Jill says

"hey! i wanted what's best for Kendall and you didn't give me time to do that." Abby says
"i know." Jill says
"are you going to turn my child away knowing she's has talent and she belongs in this group." Jill says
"i'm in the middle of a rehearsal!" Abby says
"right then you rehearse!" Jill says. then Jill opens the door and brings Kendall in and i gasp.
"you know what Abby..here you hold your picture, she deserves to be on that pyramid." Jill says and brings Kendall over to the middle in between Chloe and Kenzie and Jill walks to beside to mom, I then hug Kendall
"girls! this is not about friends if you want to see Kendall invite her to your house this is my business." Abby says

"can you find it in your heart to allow her to" Jill starts.
"Jill!" Abby says.
"to be apart of this team" Jill finishes
"Jill i will be willing to talk to you a later date." Abby says
"okay." Jill says

"now we are going to star power in lancaster not very far but a big competition lots of people from New Jersey and the New York area will be in attendance" Abby says

"moving onto the pyramid on the bottom of the pyramid Mackenzie, when things are done in a contagious and you do it first and then Paige then Nia when you do it so fast you make Paige and Nia look like they're off like they are the ones who are wrong."
"next Nia, the aerial walkover got you into trouble don't let it happen again you need to slow down."

"Paige, you really didn't do anything wrong but you're apart of the trio so you have to take responsibility for it."
"Chloe, Chloe it was good but you get into those categories with a eleven and twelve year olds and you never get up there where i think you belong."

"next i have Brooke, Brooke you did a great job your technique looks clean from where i was sitting i thought your facial expressions were wonderful i thought you were outstanding."

"then i have Evie, that aerial wasn't your best, You couldn't done better, I think it threw you off a little. I'll give you the benifit of the doubt you were only 2 points behind Maddie but the waterworks and the crying isn't going to happen you're nine years old." Abby says and i bite my lip and nod

"and on top of the pyramid Maddie, you went out there in nine till twelve and you won at nine years old."

"Maddie you'll be doing a solo this week entitled i can't find the words."

"Evie i'm letting you redeem yourself you're solo is entitled Demons." Abby says and I smile,
"Thank you," I say

"Paige you also have a solo this weekend you're music is entitled crem dele crem." Abby says
"Nia you have a solo this weekend the music is entitled working girl by laquifa." Abby says and we all cheer