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by Chel-Blue

by Chel-Blue

"Originality: 4
Length: 3
Vibe: 4
Grammar & Spelling: 8
Continuity: 6
Flow: 5
Theme: 6
Character: 5
Ending: 3
Overall: 4

Pros: It was easy to read. Much better than the other ones' I've read from you.

Cons: It's too short. Conversation was abrupt and awkward. I didn't care about the characters, and Reader-sama was sappy and slightly fake."

Entered a writing contest on DA. Obviously I need some work on my writing XD

Standards on DA must be much higher! Or I suck. Probably both X)