Ishqbaaz- Beginner's Luck

1st OS

This is the  1st os we received. Read it and then vote and comment as much as you can.
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Title:First meet which became the best meet.. 

On a fine morning in oberoi mansion...

Dadi: om puttar nashta to kar ja

Om:nahi dadi mujhe jaldi hai aaj
studio mai bahot kaam hai..

Dadi:theek hai puttar par wahan kuch kha liyo

Om: ji dadi...
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(om went for his studio..when he came out of the parking his mobile fell from his pocket...
One girl picked it up and started calling him..)
Girl: aey jata dhari aapka phone..
Arey suno aapka phone....

(But om was in hurry...
So the girl started following him . )

Girl(talking to herself): kaisa jata dhari insan hai sun hi nahi raha aaj iski wajah se mujhe der ho jayegi, huh!!

She reached to om's studio..
She started searching him and found him ...
She walked forward but didn't noticed the paint bottle on the floor...
Girl: hey jata dhari...(she slipped on the bottle and fell upon a painting)

Om hearing the sound turned and got shocked to see the situation..

Om: hey! You ok?
Can't u see and walk properly?
You spoiled my master piece!!

(She got up and started saying something while closing her eyes in guilt)

Girl: woh humko maaf kar dijiye..
Hum harharayike aapka phone dene aaye they aur humne dekha nahi aur hum takra gaye!!

But when she heard a laugh she slowly open her eyes to saw om was laughing...

Girl: aap hans kyun rahe hai ??

Om: kyunki... Ruko mai tumhe dikhata hun ..

Om bring a mirror and show it to girl...

Girl: hey shankar bhagwan!! Ye ka ho gaya...

Om: ye paint hai jo tumhare face par meri painting se lagi hai...

Girl put her hand in front of her face...

Girl: aap hansna band kijiye aur kuch dijiye jis se hum apna chehra saaf karen...

Om: ok ok !!
Come with me ...

Om took the girl to the washroom..

Om: lo ab saaf karo apna chehra..

Girl: waise humko maaf kar dijiye humne wo aapka ka wo chitra bigad diya...

Om: koi baat nahi par tum yahan aise kyun aayi. 

Girl: wo jata dhari ji hum aapka phone lotane aaye they jo aapne gira diya tha..

Om: achha....
Ek minute tumne mujhe kya bulaya...???

Girl: jata dhari!!

Om:  ye bekar se naam se mat bulao...
Mera naam omkara hai

Girl: theek hai omkara ji...
Ab hum chalte hai aur hume ho sake toh maaf kar dena...

Om: koi baat nahi...
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Next day when om was going to studio he saw the same girl.
She was teaching dance to some kids..
Om was very much mesmerized by her dance moves..and her beauty...

Om:she is beautiful...

A boy to girl: gauri di mujhse nahi hoga ye...

Gauri: arey kyun nahi hoga dekho aise karna hai. 

The way she was teaching dance was nice...

Gauri saw om and went to him...

Gauri: omkara ji aap yahan?

Om: haan wo mera studio yahi paas mai hai...

Gauri: aap bahot ache kalakar hai...

Om: thank you ..
If u don't mind kya tum chalegi mere sath mere studio??

Gauri: hum ka karenge wahan..??

Om: woh .. tum chalo toh..

Gauri: theek hai...

They both went to the studio..

Gauri was mesmerized by the paintings and om was a little lost in looking gauri...
He thought something and went to her..

Om: I saw tum dance acha karti ho...

Gauri: thanku

Om: kya tum meri model banogi??

Gauri: ka banenge??

Om:model ...
Mera matlab ki mai tumhari drawing banaunga..

Gauri: humara..

Om: haan tumhara..
Pls gauri na mat kehna…

Gauri: theek hai par aapko humara naam kaise pata..

Om:wo maine us bache ko kehte suna...

Gauri: oh.theek hai toh aap kab banayenge ...

Om: aaj hi

Gauri: abhi??

Om: haan ...

Then om did some set up for his drawing...
And he made gauri sit on a couch...

After a time om was lost in gauri...
He was no more conectrating  on painting...

Gauri: omkara ji(no response)
Omkara ji( no response)

She walked to him and shaked him..

Gauri: omkara ji!!!

Om: haan kya hua??

Gauri: wahi to hum pooch rahe hai ka hua ??ban gayi ka??

Om: woh. .haan ban gayi...

Gauri: dikhayi ye...

Waah kitni achi hai aap toh sach me bahot ache kalakar ho...

Om: thanks to you...
Tumhari wajah se mai itni achi painting bana paya...
Ek request hai.

Gauri: haan boliye.

Om: kya tum mere sath kaam karogi ....
Mujhe ek exhibition ke liye painting chaiye toh mai tumhari paintings ko exhibition ke liye use karunga.. 

Gauri: par...

Om: please....

Gauri: acha theek hai...

Om was very much happy inside...
He was feeling like he got what his heart wants..it was their first meet in life... But for om it becomes the best meet of his life..

Om (in mind): I saw her for the first time but when I saw her my heart whispered " it's the one!!"...

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