Hello Everyone! First of all, I would like to say thank you for reading this crappy story. Just to clarify you why it's so so crappy, everything here says it and I have no focus on its theme and today, I realized it is and unacceptable in my standards and probably yours kaya I decided that I'll be changing it soon.
I'm not sure when because I'm always busy and hindi nawawala ang writer's block but I assure you babaguhin ko toh and I'll make it worthy of reading. This isn't an empty promise kagayan ng mga sinabi ko noon because this story reflects on how I write which is fully part of my whole living being and this one is really cringe-worthy.
WHAT MAKES THIS CRAPPY?
The theme. I'm done defending myself to the critical-thinkers out there as to why this story got lost in its theme kasi tama naman sila. It's suppose to be about agent schools, students, and how they train and their point of view but it turned out becoming a drama and Romance. It's all my fault guys! tbh, I really love romance and nadamay pa ito and I'm very sorry kaya I will improve the plot of this story. Less Romance, More thrill pero di muna ngayon, busy pa si ate.
Setting and Characters. Another one are the ugly names! Omg! the names of the characters aren't made realistically kaya babaguhin ko rin yung mga names nila. Since this story's setting is in the Philippines, I think mas maganda if Pinoy rin yung mga names nila or kundi Spanish or Italian kasi uso rin naman yung last names nila dito sa ating bansa.
The Plot. If you've remembered every events, nawawala na yung sense nito sa kung ano talaga. The background story of the characters won't be change kasi okay lang naman yung background story nila, siguro on how they retell their story lang and how it ends. Maganda sana ito if may book 2 pero since madali lang akong nawawala sa goals ko, titignan lang natin.
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How about you? May napansin ka bang general mistake dito? Kindly point it out to me by giving me a private message :) thank you .
You deserve good stories guys and this isn't worthy so as of now, this will be still be available in My Works pero soon, mababago rin ito, I'll just update you from time to time. It's fine if you remove this in your reading list or library. I fully understand :)
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