I Think It's Too Cliche

Fixing 9

Does it have to be her first party? I mean you can't be eighteen and never been to one.

She doesn't have to meet her hero at the party. In fact she shouldn't need his help at all. Aren't we independent women? We can fight our own fights and kick him where the sun don't shine.

After her outfit change the guy finally sees her. She was there the whole time! Just because I changed my clothes and hair doesn't make me a different person. Different. That is always the way the character describe herself as she looks into the mirror.

I look different.

All the parties are the same. The music, alcohol and people.

Can we change a party? I don't know make it actual fun? Well if you know what to change and not make it cliche, please tell me.

I think parties are all the same and that's what makes it too cliche. Again twist it up, and a few tweaks here and there and let it end up totally different than all parties. Can they maybe steal a tree like in Bad Moms 2 and get arrested for it? I don't know make it fun and funny.

And please don't let anyone confess their feelings when they're drunk. That's... low.