This is for @Bnava00
I put it in third person for people who still want to imagine. If you want me to keep it first person I can do that I just wanted to change it up a little.
The sun began to go down as You arrived to the beach. Every once in a while You loved coming to the beach at this time just to see the sunset. This time you took your best friend Milo with you. He'd never been at the beach at this time of night.
You two climbed on top of the car and prepared for a pretty sight. Milo looked of at you and had his mouth wide open.
"Brenda oh my gosh it's so pretty. I never knew."
"I know. See why I rave about it all the time?" He nodded.
"Wanna race to the race to the water?" He asked. He has a short attention span. You raced him down there and he started splashing water on you. You started laughing.
"Brenda thank you for taking me here. I had fun."
You nodded and smiled.
Sorry it's short. I've been busy recently so I'm more tired. I've been moving.
