(HONEY!)

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HONEY!
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TITLE: 10/10! I like that it actually relates to the story instead of being like a song title, or something completely irrelevant! COVER: 8/10! It's cute (not my best work, though, sorry b) but I wish it matched your others because it kind of stic...

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TITLE: 10/10! I like that it actually relates to the story instead of being like a song title, or something completely irrelevant!
COVER: 8/10! It's cute (not my best work, though, sorry b) but I wish it matched your others because it kind of sticks out like a sore thumb!
FACE CLAIM(S): 7/10! Sadie is kind of overused for IT fics and I kind of wished you had a little diversity because adding two white characters to an already super white cast is kind of a snoozefest
SUMMARY: 6/10! It's really simple and it doesn't really tell me what the story's about, but I like the song!
STORYLINE: 9/10! Honey is super cute and I love her moxie! She's a little bit like a Mary Sue though, so make sure you give her some flaws so she seems more realistic and relatable!
OVERALL: 40/50! (add all the points from the categories for the total out of 50!)

( nicole! )

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