Reviewed by: AsfiyaSayyad
Author: @raizelrose3
Chapters read: 3
~~~~~~~~~~Cover~~~~~~~~~~
I liked your cover. It was pretty good. And the font is also good. I could say I almost judged your book from your cover!
~~~~~~~~~~Title and Blurb~~~~~~~~~
The title's perfect for your story! It's different from what we usually get to see or read. It's unique and I really like it. About your blurb, it's good, not too informative nor less. It gives an idea of how the story is and attracts the reader to read your book.
~~~~~~~~Description ~~~~~~~~
Your description was pretty well! It didn't reveal much about the plot like some descriptions do, and it was intriguing.
~~~~~~~~~~~Grammar ~~~~~~~~~~~
Your grammar's good. Though I found a small mistake in your second chapter: Villainess Rises and Food.....
"Seriously? Throwing me in the well, huh?" my father's calm voice......
I think them in the 'my' should be capitalised.
Other than this, I didn't find any other mistakes.
~~~~~~~~~~Characters~~~~~~~~~~~
The characters are few but good, until now. Though, they could be a little more descriptive.
~~~~~ Overall Plot~~~~~~
The plot is very nice. There are no plot holes in the three chapters. The story is unique, of a totally different kind.
~~~~~~~Random notes~~~~~~~
A small advice, keep the paragraphs small, it is easier to read.
~~~~~~~~~Final notes~~~~~~~~
The book is wonderful. It has a unique storyline and the author has done a great job writing it. Keep up the good work!
~~~~~~~~~Short Rubric~~~~~~~~
Cover: 9/10
Title: 10/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar: 9/10
Flow: 9/10
Description:10/10
Character:8/10
Enjoyment: 8/10
Plot: 18/20
Total: 89/100
KEEP IT UP!
VOUS LISEZ
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