6candy, your review by Bookworm_Love4me is ready.
Cover- 7/10
The cover, despite being very beautiful, was generic. I've seen a couple books with the same cover round wattpad. So I'd say you should change your cover for your book to stand out a bit.
Title- 4/10
The title was so long, it was off-putting for me to read the book and dig deeper. I suggest you shorten it.
Summary- 14/15
The summary was good, it had a couple grammar mistakes here and there, though.
Characters- 2/5
The characters seemed forced. Very forced. It was full of telling, telling and telling. I mean, for me, it didn't even seem like he was sad because of his girlfriend's death. He just kept on saying he didn't deserve her and it was his fault, but it seemed completely forced.
Grammar- 24/25
The grammar was almost perfect, sparing a couple mistakes here and there.
Overall- 25/35
I didn't really enjoy it, it felt forced, as I said earlier. But the effort and a unique topic such as this deserved 25.
Total- 76/100
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