Cover- 7/10
The cover is sorta bleak, and colorless. Make it a little brighter or so with pinks and reds and other such colors. Nice picture and font, though.
Title- 8/10
It is not too short or long, snarky, I liked it.
Summary- 14/15
The summary was perfect, it drew me into the book, punctuation errors, though.
Characters- 2/5
So, reading this reminded me so much of Dork Diaries, and not in a good way. 'Oh, I'm so sad and friendless, everyone bullies me and yet I'm so strong,' it just isn't real. It felt so fake.
Grammar- 24/25
The grammar was good, but there were errors here and there.
Overall- 25/35
I didn't enjoy it, but the grammar and other good qualities made me give it a 25
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Purva
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