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Judge: AriaGranger11 kyracurious214 Sanjana43374

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Book: Tease~Jikook

Cover and Title: 9
Blurb: 5
Opening Chapter: 10
Characterisation: 8
Plot: 8
Conflict: 9
Protagonist and Antagonist: 8
Supporting Character: 5
Style and description: 8
Literary Devices: 8
Mechanics: 9
Length of chapters: 8
Grammar and Punctuation: 9
Message: 7
Enjoyment and Overall Impression: 17
TOTAL (128)

Review: The cover is captivating, and makes the reader want to read. The blurb is okay, and could have been a bit more enhanced by adding a bit of mysterious vibe. The opening chapter is good, it entices the reader to read more. The characters don't have distinct traits, they need to be a bit more rounded. The chapters a bit too long and if possible, then the chapters need to be a bit short to be accurate enough for a decent length chapter. There are grammatical errors, but can be fixed. Overall, the book is good for a casual read, if the mistakes are fixed.

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Book: Not So Anonymous

Cover and Title: 9/10
Blurb: 5/5
Opening chapter: 9/10
Characterization: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Conflict: 8/10
Protagonist and Antagonist: 7/10
Supporting character: 4/5
Literary devices: 8/10
Mechanics: 8/10
Length of the chapters: 8/10
Grammar and Punctuation: 8/10
Message: 8/10
Enjoyment and Overall Impression: 18/20
TOTAL: 116/150

Review: the cover is really good. The title is also amazing. The blurb is also very well written. The opening chapter is interesting, but I think you revealed the plot a little too soon. Characterization is fine. Style of description is very good. There are some minor grammar errors and typos. The length of the chapters is a little long, but your  fine writing covers it up. The viewpoint has hardly been changed, I suggest you do that.

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Book: I Am Your Umbrella

Cover and Title:  7/10
Blurb:  3/5
Opening Chapter:8/10
Characterisation: 8/10
Plot: 7/10
Conflict: 8/10
Protagonist and Antagonist: 8/10
Supporting Character: 4/5
Style and description: 9/10
Literary Devices: 7/10
Mechanics: 8/10
Length of chapters: 7/10
Grammar and Punctuation: 8/10
Message: 7/10
Enjoyment and Overall Impression: 17/20
TOTAL: 116/150

REVIEW: The title is good, but the blurb needs to be cut down and try to keep the only information required to make the readers wanna read more and don't give out the whole story in the blurb. The poster with the characters was very creative and deeply appreciate, it adds depth to the characters. The plot's pace is good but the length of the chapters are a bit too much. The writing style is good, but needs a bit more enhancing to it. There are also only a few minor grammatical mistakes which needs to be corrected. Overall, the story is really good, and only needs some editing.

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Book: Until There Was You

Cover and Title:  9/10
Blurb:  5/5
Opening Chapter:10/10
Characterisation: 9/10
Plot: 9/10
Conflict: 8/10
Protagonist and Antagonist: 9/10
Supporting Character: 5/5
Style and description: 10/10
Literary Devices: 9/10
Mechanics: 9/10
Length of chapters: 8/10
Grammar and Punctuation: 10/10
Message: 8/10
Enjoyment and Overall Impression: 19/20
TOTAL: 137/150

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