Jan-4-2022Hiiii,
So I unpublished this book because I don't know how my readers actually read this book with the obvious grammar mistakes and misspelled words and missing words in sentences. It was so bad that I couldn't even edit it because of the cringe and the urge to just throw myself off a building was welcoming.
IT TOOK ME 7 MONTHS TO ACTUALLY OFFICIALLY START EDITING THIS BOOK.......I did it though last minute. I changed the whole story to what actually intended it to be and made the characters how I had originally wanted them to be.
The old book didn't follow how I wanted the book to be and how the characters should've been so I took my time to actually try to show how I wanted each character to be like and fix the book.
I hope this version is better than the old version.
[Sept-07-20]
Hello thanks for clicking on this book it really means a lot since this is my first ever book.
I finally got the courage to upload this book. This also is just a book I wrote at the top of my head so it doesn't have the best editing.
I'm also using another language in the book I personally don't know it so I've used google translate feel free to correct me if there are mistakes. I don't mean to offend anyone
I've used mature language in my book so if you don't like that then....don't read the book. There also some scenes that may tiggers some people so I've added warning so if you don't want read then skip it
I hope you enjoy this story
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Characters
Isabella Bianchi
14
5'4Alessandro Bianchi
26
6'4Liam Bianchi
6'3
24Angelo Bianchi
6'2
21Sebastian Bianchi
6'4
18Matthew Bianchi
6'5
17Michael Bianchi
6'5
17Noah Bianchi
5'10
16
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A New Start(discontinued)
Short StoryIt all started when her mom died leaving her with her stepfather. After that there was never a day she went by without a beating. Suffering from depression, anxiety and trust issues she goes by with life with a fake smile and personality. But it doe...