ArShi Story: The Untold Story of Dark Knight King : @Twinkle_Alisha

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ArShi Story: The Untold Story of Dark Knight King

Written by : @Twinkle_Alisha

Judge : PeherKothari

Title-7/10
Blurb-5/10
Cover - 5/10
Plot- 8/10
Character development-8 /10
Grammar-8/10
Flow- 8/10
Dialogue/Expression- 7/10
Creativity/originality-8/10
Overall - 7/10

Total- 71/90

At first it was a bit confusing but eventually all got understood.

The story was entertaining. Overall there weren't mistakes to point out, except:

The description and cover of the book.

The description isn't much attractive and definitely needs to be changed. The cover on the other hand is not much appealing. These two things are lacking in your book otherwise, it is quite close to perfect!

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