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Booktrovertsreviews tarafından

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An accident

Written by : chahak_trivedi_0307

Judge : PeherKothari

Title-7/10
Blurb-0/10
Cover - 6/10
Plot- 6/10
Character development-7/10
Grammar-6/10
Flow- 7/10
Dialogue/Expression- 3/10
Creativity/originality-7/10
Overall - 6/10

Total- 55/100

In the very first chapters, there is no space between lines, it's all messed up together. Add space to distinguish between dialogues/paragraphs.

Secondly, , Hindi dialogues. It was mentioned in rules, book must be in English with only a little in Hindi. I'm sorry dear, but Hindi isn't my mother tongue nor did I study it much in school. Though I understand much, it is very difficult for me. You can probably see, points are deducted in that area.

The plot of arranged marriage, cute love is too cliche, and there is not much difference between your book and others! you need something to make your book stand out in public.

The thing which I should have mentioned first, the blurb is just one sentence, "saccha pyaar kabhi marta nahi", you really need to construct a better blurb.

Overall, it was a good book.