True love
Written by : itskhushichauhan
Judge : PeherKothari
Title-6/10
Blurb-0/10
Cover - 2/10
Plot- 7/10
Character development- 7/10
Grammar-6/10
Flow- 7/10
Dialogue/Expression- 5/10
Creativity/originality-7/10
Overall -5 /10
Total- 52/90
The is good but it can be better, coming to cover it's just one simple picture. You need to change it.
There is no blurb in the book, just four words, "Kavin Purvi Love Story," Readers come over and start reading your book only if they like the blurb, but in this case there is no blurb.
Next, Hindi dialogues. It was mentioned in rules, book must be in English with only a little in Hindi. I'm sorry dear, but Hindi isn't my mother tongue nor did I study it much in school. Though I understand much, it is very difficult for me. You can probably see, points are deducted in that area.
Coming to grammar area, you have not followed some basic rules of Grammar, you need a heavy editing here!
Overall, it was good.
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