So I really want to finish this story and wanted peoples opinion. I really want to rewrite it so that it's easier to follow and the story is less confusing.
I really value everyone's opinions. So should I rewrite the story and finish or continue???
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Death's Angel
Fantasy"You are MINE" he growled. We circled the table once more. "I am not yours. I'm leaving and that's it" I tried to say but it came out in a whisper. I slowly got into a defensive position. Without breaking eye contact I brought out my wings. he held...
