𝐌𝐚𝐣𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐢𝐜 𝐂𝐨𝐧𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐥𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧𝐬 | 𝐀𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐝 𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤

➥𝐑𝐄𝐒𝐔𝐋𝐓𝐒 I {Short Stories}

URSA MINOR {SHORT STORIES}

📇∘─Results of Short stories─∘📇

1. Everything happens for a reason by -sarcasticchica-

📌 Title: 4/5
📌 Cover: 4/5
📌 Setting: 7/10
📌 Characters: 8/10
📌 Plot: 7/10
📌 Conflict: 5/10
📌 Flow/Organization: 8/10
📌 Style/Narration: 8/10
📌 Resolution: 7/10
📌 Grammar: 6/10
📌 Theme: 5.5/10
📌 Total: 70/100

Nicely thought out title. Loved the use of lyrics in the beginning of each chapter, and the story behind them. Good use of grammatical expressions, but the blurb needs some editing due to collision of tenses. The story moved a bit fast, as scenes were rushed and the POVs changed suddenly. Good, but could be better.

2. Silence of Melody by mintquex

Title: 4.5/5
Cover: 4.5/5
Setting: 9/10
Characters: 8/10
Plot: 9/10
Conflicts: 9/10
Flow/Organization: 9/10
Style/Narration: 8/10
Resolution: 9/10
Grammar: 8/10
Theme: 9.5/10
Total: 87.5/100

A very unique story with a compelling storyline and an unexpected ending. Pace was easy to follow, especially with the beautiful use of flowers. The writing style was a bit hard to follow due to the use of long paragraphs and complex descriptions. Nicely written!

3. Forbidden Passions by PriscillaYiadom4

📌 Title: 4/5
📌 Cover: 4/5
📌 Setting: 5/10
📌 Characters: 5/10
📌 Plot: 4/10
📌 Conflict: 5/10
📌 Flow/Organization: 5/10
📌 Style/Narration: 5/10
📌 Resolution: 5/10
📌 Grammar: 5/10
📌 Theme: 5/10
📌 Total: 52/100

Good title. Confusing story line which felt rushed and a bit unrealistic. Constant switch between tenses, no use of paragraphs in the earlier chapters and lack of quotation marks in the later ones, making it hard to tell when a conversation was going on. Needs to be thoroughly edited and fleshed out more.

4. Out Ife by blacmist

📌 Title: 4/5
📌 Cover: 3/5
📌 Setting: 6/10
📌 Characters: 5/10
📌 Plot: 7/10
📌 Conflict: 6/10
📌 Flow/Organization: 5/10
📌 Style/Narration: 5/10
📌 Resolution: 5/10
📌 Grammar: 6/10
📌 Theme: 6/10
📌 Total: 58/100

Unique title, with a simple and minimalist cover which could be improved. The blurb needs to be rewritten and edited, but it is very promising. Extremely short chapters, thus no character development and setting description which made the writing style a bit hard to follow.
Nice plot, but could be made better with more work put into it.

5. Lethal Coalitions by aesthetixqueen_21

📌 Title: 5/5
📌 Cover: 4/5
📌 Setting: 7/10
📌 Characters: 8/10
📌 Plot: 7/10
📌 Conflict: 8/10
📌 Flow/Organization: 6/10
📌 Style/Narration: 8/10
📌 Resolution: 8/10
📌 Grammar: 6/10
📌 Theme: 8/10
📌 Total: 75/100

Catchy title, with a nice cover. Blurb is not the usual kind of romance story, but needs to be re-edited as there are minor tense switches. There are also more tense switches in the regular chapters. Use of punctuation in dialogue needs to be edited, there's no need for both a full stop and a comma when ending a sentence. Use just one. Unique plot, with well thought out characters. Nice work!