☣ RAYA ☣ (REVIEWS)

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1) Family by -Sarcy-

 Title : 3/5 

The Title is could have been different, there is nothing unique in it. 

Cover + blurb : 9/10

Cover is beautiful no changes in that. Blurb is quite good too. 

Originality + Creativity :  7/10

The plot is'nt original one but the author has moulded it in her own way along with bring in her creativity and working on it.

Character development :  17.8/20

It's nice as all the characters are given equal importance but the drawback is reader's can't connect with them emotionally, you don't feel for them as the author has intended to do. 

Grammar : 20/20

There are no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes so no improvement needed. 

Interaction with Readers :  5/10

The interaction with the reader's is very very less. 

Draw : 5/5

The plot is really interesting one which makes the reader's instantly a part of it and the world the author has created. 

Overall impression : 18.2/20

Overall it's a beautiful story totally justified the title though it could have something else, as it doesn't creat that kind of excitement by just seeing it. 

Total : 85/100

2) Jaan by -Sarcy-

Title : 4/5 

The Title is interesting but not unique giving in what's it all about. 

Cover + blurb : 8/10

Cover is nice but wish the author had shown some creativity in it. Blurb is interesting and intriguing.

Originality + Creativity :  10/10

The plot is very much original and the author has perfectly depicted it with her own creativity in it, bringing in something new and different. 

Character development :  17.8/20

It's nice as all the characters are given equal importance but the drawback is reader's can't connect with them emotionally, you don't feel for them as the author has intended to do. 

Grammar : 20/20

There are no grammatical errors or spelling mistakes so no improvement needed. 

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