So I'm going to be discontinuing this book.
Why?
I feel like this book is a second hand embarrassment since I was re reading this. Plus this was a book that didn't even make sense since I wrote this one sentence that went like. "ALRIGHT ITS BEEN TWO MONTHS." Why would Yoriichi be concerned when it's been two months? Should have been 1-3 days that his concern kicked in.
Also it's because the characters are out of character. If Kokushibo was a yandere I don't think he would be abusive. He would only kill the people who are close to the reader. And then once he killed everyone he would shower you with "Love" not abusing you. He would have some times where he would hit you but not all the time.
In all conclusions i'm discontinuing this book. You can adopt this book and continue it on your account if you'd like. Just be sure to put that you adopted this book on your version of this story if you do.
Have a good day and thank you for reading this story :)
Sincerely Pikapi209
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