❝I'm such an idiot, Mari. I wasted so much time pretending to hate you when I could have loved you instead.❞
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Neteyam and Marali grew up together as best friends. They had been inseparable until the fateful day came when they would have to train...
Hey everyone! I have a question for y'all, so I would really appreciate the feedback.
Don't freak out, I'm not discontinuing the story, I still have major plans for this book, I've just been throwing around ideas for the plot.
I was originally going to have a kiss scene within the next couple of chapters, but I felt that I was rushing it as they haven't had as much interaction in the book yet. What do you guys think? Should I put in some filler chapters to develop Neteyam and Marali's relationship?
I could really use your guys' feedback as I'm a bit stuck.
Keep an eye out for another update tomorrow!
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