HELP

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Ok guys I haven't written an actual song-song in a while just poems...like I'd write a few lines to a song but never a full song,so I have a question about the few lines of a song below

I didn't mean to leave you standing there

All alone in the warm summer air

Doin nothing but holding back the tears

The things I wish you'd say after all these years

Sure its pointless but a girl could dream

Dream that things may not be as they seem

But these are things that only my mind holds

It'd be better if your blood didn't run so cold

Should the song take a sweet turn like the things the said girl wanted happened or should it become a rant or something like that(I don't know how to explain it) but ya comment what u think my very very very few readers lol

Anywho I have another song idea they just pop up one about a girl loosing the guy she likes to another girl lol I'm so cliche XD

But ya vote comment follow

Love you,

  hunger games_always AKA Annabelle❤❤✌✌

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