"When writers DON'T describe the things in their story through THE CHARACTER'S EYES - it gets a bit boring and doesn't let the character stand in the limelight ." -by CritiqueMePlease
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"People who write about their main character in third person, but then give the thoughts of the other characters as well... I hate that.
And [chapters with] Only dialogues, or as I like to call it 'talking head syndrome'. Books help people envision what the author is thinking. It's not interesting to just have two floating heads talking in space. Like Markus Zusak said, 'If your eyes could speak, what would they say?'" - by Daughter-Of-The-Sea
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The DONT's of Wattpad Book Writing
Random-Things you hate when reading [Wattpad] stories. This book is a collection of rants/advice concerning annoying things that recur in many books here on Wattpad. The quotes come from comments on the thread "THINGS YOU HATE WHEN READING STORIES" create...