The general lack of description in the majority of fantasy books I've read on here.
Seriously?! Come on. I know you're in a market/forest/magical cave but TELL me what the f&Ck is around you.
You're in the market, great. What do you smell, what do you see? I don't want to read about the love of your life/that all powerful wizard that's going to teach you the "ways" that's just ambled round the corner.
What corner?
I don't know, you didn't bloody tell me!
by Adele-C
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