THIS IS NOT FAN-FICTION ABOUT BRAM STOKERS "Dracula"!!!
Hey guys this is my new story hope you like it :)
btw dont know anything about dracula irl but that he liked to torture people and his wife killed herself so imma do my own version ;)
Update 2012: Hey everyone just letting you know this story might start off a little short and have some grammar issues so sorry for that! i hope you all enjoy/enjoyed this i love you all so much thank you for the support :)!
Update 2013: Hello, it has been brought to my attention that some of you think that this is fanfiction of Bram stokers 'Dracula'. It is not in any way related to that story other than one of the characters father who is implied to be Vlad Dracula.
Again I apologize for the "horrific" grammar and un-edited plot of this story. I have recieved some negative and rude comments about the grammar and would like to state that i was a young child who taught herself to write.
I tried to bring to your attention before reading and i am currently working on re-writing this.
I would like to also say that it is very rude to say that you want to murder someone with an axe because of creative writing that they did as a child.
One of my favorite saying's is "If you can't say something nice then don't say it at all", i honestly don't get what the point is of making someone feel like they are worthless because of something they wrote long ago.
Just know that negative comments can discourage young writers that have a love for writing and dampen the spirit of creativity.
In my opinion that is a sad thing.
I hope that others will continue to read and enjoy this story as I make improvement's to the grammar and the plot.
Thanks for reading.
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Chapter one.
This place drive's me batty!
We all lined up in the entrance of Dracula's castle somewhere i've always wanted to go.
"You all will have seperate room's and there will be nightly check up's at random hour's" the middle aged woman named Medusa said giving pointed look's to the boy's
who were smirking at some of the girl's.
There's twelve of us all in all six girl's and six guy's not including the tour guide's.
"Dracula's room is strictly off limits!" Mr. webster said strictly as handing out our keys while Medusa did head count's.
"Sonee Rave?" Medusa said loudly
"here!" i said smiling brightly
"k Andrei hearts" she said shouting the next name but i was too busy day dreaming about this beautiful place we call Romania.
"Alright i see that you all look tired so i will show the boy's to their room's and Miss V will take the girl's" He said while gathering all the cute guy's to
follow him down the long hallway and all the girl's inlcuding me went down the opposite corridor.
As i opened the door to my room with my silver skeleton key that had a long old chain attached to it which made it look more like a necklace then a key, then a sudden
idea popped in my head and i threw the key over my head and it hung right above my breast.
I expected the room to be motel room like with std sheet's and cockroach tub but no this was five star hotel room!
dark blood red satin sheet's with a matching comforter and pillow's with black rose's and butterfliy's that were not filled in to let the red seep in.
Neat black carpet that was perfectly vacuumed, the room was beautiful and perfect for my taste.
The bathroom was the complete opposite of the room but it was still nice light blue wall's, wooden toilet and a blue and white bathtub right in the center of the room.
I sighed and plopped down on the very elegant soft bed.
How i even got here was amazing like one out of five hundred, i won by a school contest that i never thought i would win but i'm glad i did i thought smiling and soon drifted
off to a dream filled sleep.
A/N:
whatcha think? i know its kinda boring now but just wait O: its gonna get gruesome xD or as some call it thrilling ;)
btw sry for any mistakes please point out!! :)
song on the side: i feel you II by: nightcore (remixed by nightcorikal)
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pic on the side is the key!! beautiful right? love at first sight x swoons x
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A night with Dracula
Vampire"I wanna kill you.." He whispered huskily. "I dare you" I said. Seventeen year old Sonee rave win's a contest to go stay at Dracula's castle for two week's and everything is fine at first.. before two people have gone missing or at least that's what...
