Mine (Z.H)

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-You look really pretty today babe

-Oh, thank you

-Is that a new skirt

(this is awkward, say something nice, anything else, maybe you should just stop talking)

-you noticed? uh yeah i just got it the other day

-Well, it looks real nice on you

(he's surprised you noticed, but you notice everything he does? just stop talking stop talking stop talking)

-Thank you, um your jacket is nice

-yeah

(great you've made him uncomfortable, say something nice, no just shut your mouth)

-ok, well um i'll see you tomorrow Zee?

(stop him, say something, anything, he's leaving)

-yeah, i wanted to ask you something

-is everything alright?

(he's worried about you, grow a pair and ask him)

-Uh, i was wondering if you would like to come over to my place, you know? only if you want to?

(you stuttered, why did you stutter?)

-really? 

(he thinks you're joking, why does he think you're joking?)

-yeah, um he could hang out, study uh watch movies, whatever you want

-uh, ok i'll talk to my parents about it

-ok, um maybe this weekend on saturday?

(why the hell are you so awkward? pull your sht together Malik)

-yeah that sounds wonderful

-alright, I'll pick you up then

-ok, um bye i love you

(say it say it back, say something anything)

-ok bye babe

(he's shutting the door, you made him sad, are you stupid say something!)

-bye Zee

(he's walking away, say something, do something, he's inside, it's too late)

- a bottle of scotch is waiting for me at home

                                                                     and he drives away.

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this is a really short chapter, and a different writing style, the sentences in parenthesis -()- are Zayn's thoughts, what is going on in his mind, do yall (sorry im from TX, just comes out) like this or should i just stick to the classic style? 

i kinda like it.

ok bye guys, stay safe

Liz xx