Parting Request

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Hi Lupas!! (feels good to say that for the first time :P)

Before I declare this Behind the Scenes book completed, I have a tiny request for you, which you don't have to do, obviously, but I think it will interest you.

I'm going to start editing MSW, and I could use your help. I don't mean to read over every chapter and find mistakes for me, cause that's easy enough to do. Tell me everything you think is wrong with the plot, is not really believable in the story or bothered you while you were reading. It can be some small detail I didn't pay attention to, or something major that might change some chapters. Whatever it is, I'd like to hear it. I'll give you some examples to clarify:

1. A description of Dylan is needed.

2. The chapters between Dylan finding out Logan is her mate and him finding out she's a girl are long and tiring.

3. The subplot of the kidnapped boys needs more attention.

4. More interaction between Logan and Dylan before she finds out he's her mate is needed.

etc, etc.

Thank you to anyone willing to help! I love you Lupas!

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