Love You EveryWorlds [on hold]

Chapter 1

    Hi my name is MarryMEA and this is my first time writing a story so there might be a lot of grammar errors, misspell words, plot hole or sometimes rush storyline and that is bound to happen because English is not my first language. And here I hope you can enjoy my story😀
Bow 🙇‍♀️ Always welcome correction and feel free to give advice. Thank you 😊
I know my English is not very good and if anyone can help me edit it, I would be grateful😊😊😁
                    
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Third POV
Wu Jinfan, who was call a genius for his whole life, has never thought that there was the day, he was this heartbroken. His life was very successful, with not many hardships, he was a child prodigy in musical and now he is the most well-known musician in the world. He has everything from wealth, a loving family, good look, now love has come to him, but who know that love was not sweet as he thought? It was very bitter. Su jing, the woman he love for the first time betrayed him for his best friend,JianFan.
For what reason? He didn't know. If his love was not enough, why didn't she tell him? Why betray him? But all this questions is useless now, the past is the past, what is the point in knowing it? From then on he always thought that love was just a useless emotion and swore to never fall in love again, if he was to marry, he would do without love involve.
   Because of his heartbroken, he booked
the ticket to Hawaii, who know that he didn't has a chance to come back? The plane he was in caught in the rain storm and crashed. And right now he doesn't know where he is, everything is white with no other colors. This place is strange, its has no window, no door. Didn't he died? Where is he? But he didn't has any regret besides the well-being of his family. While he lost in his thought, suddenly a cheerful voice speak in his mind.
[Hello! Host my name is 'system SSA045'
It is a pleasure to meet you!]

"who..?" Who is this?, ah maybe he is crazy now or is this some hallucination?

[No, it is real host, now host is bound to system and host is to travel to different worlds to complete the test that system give you, host.]

" seriously...this is not a dream or some crazy prank or something, right?" I thought that I was too hurt that I become crazy ah!

[I think host remembered that host is already died, now host is just a soul. Right now, Host is in system's space, if host has questions feel free to ask me, I will answer it if I can.] Ah, this time my luck is good that my host is not a sadist and is normal, if not...? Oh I don't want to think aaaah *shiver* system's thought. Little did it know that this host just good outside and inside is...( up to your imagination😉)

"So,I've already died and now is a soul, huh?" I've never thought that I died this young ah, my family how are they doing?
Is my mother ok? My father is not angry, right? my sister and little brother..sigh
" okay, now tell me all of the details about it." Jinfan glare at the light ball that flood in front of him his eyes write the words ' tell me something interesting or I will not go'.

  System feel chill in its 'imaginary spine'
And if it has eyes it would stare at Jinfan with puppy eye. Host oh host, where is my good host a minute ago? Agh, where are you, come back!! Why did you glare at me? I don't know anything!😭

[cough*cough* emm host you need to travel to different world and complete the test that I give, and upon complete you will gain points according to the world difficulty* you can use your points to buy things you need and use to upgrade your level when you reach a certain level you will have a chance to choose one world to start your life again oh and you can learn two skills every time you complete the mission, every skills is not unlocked there are lots of skills that are locked so you need to upgrade your level high enough to unlock it for example 'martial arts' your level need to upgrade to level 5 to unlock it but don't worry to reach level 5 you just need to complete two worlds is enough, and all of these skills can be use in the world you choose to live in and when the test has been completed you can choose to stay in that world or leave right away.]I thought I can escape a sadist host, but look like I can't huh? Is this my fate, to bound to sadist host every time? I feel like I become a masochist now...{Author: haha that is your fate, you can't escape it.}
*( the worlds difficulties divided in to five different types from D,C,B,A and S)

" Hoh so I can live again..and system SSA045 do I need to born again?And my memories can I take it with me?" Jinfan asks With 'You better don't lie to me' look and system don't dare to delay and answers.

[No host you don't need to reborn and you can take your memories with you!]

" system...ah your name is so long from now on I will call you Blue, ok?" Jinfan stare at the light ball with his cold eyes waiting for its answer.

[Ok.] I can't refuse, can I?

When he heard system agree, he feel that this system is very cute and easy to bully oop easy to talk to. Heheh! But his face is expressionless when he think like that. " so, Blue I am to go now or what?"

[Yes!] phew..yes yes, go please go now host. But it didn't say that out loud or else when host heard, who know what host will do to it?[ Now host please prepare! start transferring..3..2..1...complete!]

When Jinfan heard the word complete he start to feel dizzy and everything fall into darkness.
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So this is the end of chapter 1
Haha I don't know if it is good or bad but should I continue or not? Tell me in the comment section plz 😙😀
If you don't understand my meaning I am sorry because I am not good at describe something.
I hope you like it 😍😅

Wu Jinfan ( Our MC )
The picture is not mine.