Still Yn's POV:
The ambulance came and rushed Chris to hospital, he looked pale and he was barely breathing.
When we got to the hospital I tried my hardest not to cry and stay calm, I tried to push my way through to Chris' room but the doctors and nurses done everything in their power to make sure I couldn't get in
Malakai's POV:
Yn texted me telling me to get to the hospital as soon as possible so everyone drove down their to find her sitting on one of the waiting room chairs, she looked traumatised
"Malakai" she sighed and ran up to hug me
"What happened, is everything alright is it mum or-
"It's Chris he got shot and the doctors won't let me go in and see him" she said her eyes filled with anger and pain, I could tell she was hurting deep inside
Everyone was muttering having their own conversations probably about Chris, Yn didn't say anything at all she just sat down and waited for the doctors to give us the news
Yn's POV:
I couldn't talk, my whole body stopped functioning I just wanted this endless pain to stop was it ever gonna stop?
At that moment I started remembering everything bad that happened in my life from birth all the memories started flooding back
My aunty and uncle died in a car crash, my dad cheated on my mum, Miah getting abused, my secret twin brother, my cousin getting beaten to death to save me when I was 4 years old, Paris running away pregnant, Joshua cheating on me, don't my tears mean anything, don't I deserve better than this?
It was just all too much, how does all this happen in one person's life? Nearly all the people I care about has been hurt either eternally or temporarily and it's affected me in so many ways.
I was deep in my thoughts until the doctor walked up to us "I'm assuming you're friends with Chris?" she said addressing us
"Yes we are" my brother said
I stood up
"Well I'm sorry to say this but, he's slipped into a coma"
A coma?!
"What room is he in? Can I go and see him, I need to see him" I yelled, trying not to cry
"He's in room 104" she said
I ran up the stairs to the 2nd floor and went into his room I kneeled by his side and held his hand
"Chris.." I said softly and kissed his hand "Please if you can hear me... Wake up" I begged and pleaded
I prayed he would wake up, but he didn't, the doctors couldn't predict how long he would stay in a coma, that night I cried all night I couldn't keep it in, I just cried and cried until I had no more tears left
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The End .
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