PLEASE READ TO END, VERY BIG UPDATE
"Initiates, today you to the final test to become Dauntless members." Max says. "You all did good, but only a few of you make it. Here are the scores." The scoreboard wrote,
1) Tris
2) Vanessa
3) Peter
4) Christina
I stopped reading the scoreboard after Christina's name. Peter grabs me and spins me around. His eyes are connected to mind.
"Peter I st-" But it was to late, Peter kissed me. I given and kiss him back. "Let's keep it PG here." says Tris. I brake the kiss and laugh.
OKAY I KNOW THAT THIS CHAPTER ISN'T EVEN 2 PARAGRAPHS BUT IM REALLY SICK SO YEAH.
I WAS WONDERING IF YOU GUYS STILL WANT ME TO CONTINUE THESE TWO STORYS. IF NOT, I HAVE ANOTHER STORY THAT ISNT DIVERGENT. WOULD YOU GUYS READ IT? PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK, IT WOULD MEAN A LOT ~Valerie
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The One Betrayal (Peter Hayes FanFiction)
FanfictionWhen Vanessa is given a mission from Erudite leader she later finds out she needs to try and protect the one she loves
