Narrator JackI was talking with ___
-ugh! I'm so hungry!!! Do you want to go to eat something?
j:nop
-well, can you go with me?
j:mmm ok
We went to the "food bar" ,that there was no food! Just drinks, ALCOHOL drinks, we looked each other with confusion
j:do you still want to eat, well, drink?
-yea, why not?
j:I've never seen you drink alcohol, do you like it?
-I mean , it would be one of my first times,so I'll be okay
j:that's the problem, if you are new in this you should go little by little
-nah*she went with the man of the bar and asked for a" Long Island " WHAT WAS SHE THINKING? That thing has a lot of alcohol
j: DO YOU KNOW WHAT ARE YOU DRINKING!?
-*she took a drink*ahh something delicious
j:that thing has gin, tequila , vodka, rum, and triple sec!!! Also orange juice and coke
-the hell! How do you know so much about this?
j:internet, Long Island is very popular, and its TOO MUCH!
-ugh I'll be okay !
j:okay I'll let you drink just one
*one hour later...
-one more please*she said to the man
j:WHAT ARE YOU DOING! I told you one, Just one!
-what? You went out and I decided to ask for more
j: I went to my house to fix something and I came back
-u u u u u u
j:excuse me sir, how many Long Islands have you served to her?*I asked the man,
Xx:four this is the fifth
j:__!what ?
-hi hi hiiiiiiiii
j:are you okay?
-do you want the truth?
j:yes please!
-no, 🎶 help meeeeeeee🎶
j:why did you drink so much?
-🎶it isn't in my bloooooooooooooooooood🎶
j:okay stop being Shawn Mendez
-mawn shendezzzz !!! *she was going to drink the Long Island and I tried to put the glass down but she was not going to let that
j:oh! Come on! Stoop!! *she was pulling harder every time
j:wow! You are strong!* she pulled one more time and I couldn't hold it anymore so I let it go
-HA!
j:just give me that thing!
-are you sure?
j:yes!
-here you have *she dropped all the Long Island on me, I was soaked
j:uhhh *I was furious and then I leftNarrator Payton
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Orange crush(editing)
Romance___ a thirteen y/o girl lives a crazy life full of ups and downs, she has his boyfriend, Finn and three bests friends: Jaeden, Jack and Emily. As the story goes on, she say goodbyes, meet a lot of new people and goes through beautiful and awkward mo...