Orange crush(editing)

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so you are still in love with Finn, huh?

what do you mean?

  4 and a half months and you are not over it yet

what do you know? we haven't talked for a while

bitch, you don't need to talk with me to know what is happening with your life

I guess I'm not over it and I  do love him, but now  I'm eating icecream

so please let me eat the ice cream

WAIT

now what?

omg

what!?

Payton is talking about a very important experience in his life, and you are not paying attention. I don't want him to think that he is not important to you, do you?

of course not

now, GET IN THE CONVERSATION

we finished the ice cream and then we left. we walked and we went to a lot of places and then we went to Payton's house and there we changed for the formal finner

narrator Payton

I was ready but __ wasn't ready yet, so I waited downstairs. 10 minutes later she went down the stairs and she looked like a fuking princess! When she walked down I just saw everything like in slo-mo. I took her to one of the most formal restaurants in the city. My dad is well-known in the city so, being his son has a tot of pros. it was a beautiful dinner, and we laughed and we laughed. We ended so tiredly so I called an uber, she felt asleep over my shoulder. It was nice, and I- I was in love

I took her home I laid her to her bed and I tried to wake her home slightly but I couldn't so I came up with an idea

she could be enchanted so I kissed her, I know it was not going to work but I would make any excuse to kiss her I separated my lips from her and then I saw her eyes opened a little bit in my mind I was saying like "holy shit it worked!" but then __ looked at me and said with a quiet voice "what are you doing? don't stop I liked that" she smiled and got closer to me and my arms were around her. I helper her to stand up so she can clean her make up and change clothes.

narrator jaeden

the next day __ called me, she said that she wanted to talk with me.

so I went to her house and we talked about what happened two days ago. We are good now but now that I'm not with Emily, my eyes are on __. We went to star bucks and__ started talking. I wasn't paying too much attention. I was concentrated in __'s beauty. I coudn't resist to kiss her. And rappidly I putted my hands in her neck and I pulled her closer to me and I kissed her

narrator Henry

*one our ago*

I was in Paytons house doing absolutely nothing

H: this is so boring !

P: yea, I should have invited __, she is the oppositive of boring

H: no dude, you have been with her ALL week !

P: I've been with her two days

H: it's the same* he laughed*

H: what?

P: you're jealous

H: what? no... * I said in a high note

* we kept silence until I came up with an idea*

H: yo, do you want to go to a museum?

* he stared at me, aND OUt Of ThE NoWheRE BArnI gOT oUT Of ThE  KitCHeN But TheN WE heARD a  "HEE HEE" PayToN aNd I wErE CoNfuSED  BuT tHeN BARNI ToOk Of HIs HEAD anD aCtuALY hE WAs MiChaEL JAcKsON*

ok no 

sorry for that, I really needed to do that 

H: yo , do you want to go to a museum

*he stared at me *

H: you' re right, that's way worse

H: what about shopping?

P: nah, I dont feel like shopping

P: do you want to watch movies

H:I already watched all of them

P:me too

P: do you want to go to starbucks?

H:only if I drive

P: Hell no! 

H: okay then , no deal       

P: ugh, you win

P: but you'll have to GPS

H: my car, my rules

P: but its MY car

*30 minutes later*

P: dude , where the hell are we?

P: I knew this was a bad idea, you always get lost !

H: we are not lost  

P: oh yea? where are we?

H: somewhere near starbucks?

* he rolled his eyes*

P: give me that

*he grabbed my phone*

P: you didn't even put the GPS!

H: I said MY rules

P: okay you have two options, you let me drive or you put the GPS

H: fineee

P: but first, I need to drink water. I'm so freaking thirsty 

H: look , there's a seven eleven at one bluck

* we went to the seven eleven and I waited Payton in the car and when he finally came he was holding four bottles of water*

H: thanks man, but aI'm not thirsty

P: oh! the bottles, no they're not for you

H: four water bottles for your self, isn't that too much?

P: ma boy, water is never "too much"

*10 miutes later*

P: I guess four bottles of water IS too much

P: can we stop? I really need to pee

H:bro we are almost there , can you wait?

* when we arrived  Payton went running to the bathroom* I waited for payton but then, I saw __ he was kissing another guy. so I decided to approach

H: __?

-Henry? what are you doing here?

H: I came here with Payton for a starbuck

J: oh really? I thougt you were here for A McDonald's

- Jaeden! first of all, what's whith the kiss, second , Henry where is Payton?

H: he is in the bathroom the dumb ass drank four bottles of water with out thinking

-please don't tell him

H: I wont

-thank you

H:but firs you'll have to give me something

hi guys

this is the longest chapter until now (1022 words)

so I hope you liked it

bye