can you hear those crashing sounds
those hits when they land
it's the place where you cannot run
the place where you cannot stand
it's a place you don't dare breathe
a place you're afraid to see
a place so beautiful
that no one wants to be
you hear those crashing sounds
those hits when they land
but you are stuck in the deep dark blue
begging for the sight of sand
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Okay so, the reader/character is stuck in the middle of the ocean. The first two lines ("can you hear crashing sounds...those hits when they land") refer to the waves.
As most of you have probably experienced now - the last two lines are a dead giveaway of where the location is.
If you didn't get it until now, then don't worry - neither did my friend (heheh dumbass)
- Dominic
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