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A place to bring out all those undiscovered diamonds hidden in the big dark cave of coal...
Who is to determine what our dream
should be? Who is to say that we must
always have big goals...
• Marks for following rules: 5/5 • Marks for reader interaction: 3/5 *3.5 • Marks for book cover: 5/5 • Marks for book description: 4/5 • Marks for book Title: 4/5 • Marks for social message: 4/5 • Marks for book plot: 7/10 *8.5 • Marks for grammar and vocab: 18/20 *18.5 • Marks for plot twist/attraction: 7/10 *8.5 • Marks for emotion development: 6/10 *8• Marks for creativity: 6/10 *8• Marks for opinion on book: 8/10
• Total: 77/100 *85/100
• Review: I loved this book. I'm so happy I was assigned it because it's such a nice read. I loved the twist at the very beginning that I definitely wasn't expecting. I loved the cover as well. To improve I would say that there are some grammar changes to be made but mostly pronoun issues (he, she, it, his, her etc. )that can be easily solved by re-reading. But other than that, I think it was a lovely book and I can't wait to see what happens next.:)
Marks for book cover: 4/5 The book cover is attractive and eye catchy.
Marks for book title: 5/5 The title matches with the story as well and unique too. The author has combined the main characters love for each others and horses together to bring out a unique name for the book.
Marks for book description: 5/5 Description was not long as well as not short. As well as it did not gave out too much of details of the plot.
Marks for social message: 5/5 “We should never judge about others we don’t know what they are actually going through” was the message which the author wanted to convey to the readers through the story.