⌦𝗕𝗘 𝗬𝗢𝗨𝗥𝗦𝗘𝗟𝗙 𝗔𝗪𝗔𝗥𝗗𝗦 [CLOSED] 2020

JJK PARTICIPANTS REVIEWS!

Note: I ain't changing anything, this chapter was a draft thus I'm uploading it for the participants. P.s. 11 JJK participants already Disappeared, it's been 7 months since the awards ended uff-

Judge: btsfantasyworld

Can we by  KOOKIESS_07

Can we? : 79/100 *84/100 *Rules: 5/5  Title : 5/5Reader interaction: 5/5Book cover: 4/5Description : 5/5Social message: 4/5Book plot : 8/10Grammer: 15/20Plot twist : 8/10Emotion or character development : 8/10Creativity: 8/10Personal opinion: 9/10

Can we: 79/100 *84/100  I like her her book title it make readers curious. Cover was ok it doesn't mean cover was not nice. The cover was nice but it didn't catch my eye.Description make me read her story. The description is well written. There are some grammatical mistakes but its ok. Plot was also great.Readers seem to enjoy her book so readers interaction was nice.The only tip i would like to give is you should improve grammer a little. Overall the story was great.Others readers should also check the story out. The book deserve more views. 

JUDGE: PurvaV

Stay with me by leeseulbi08

Stay with me by Rules 5/5All the rules are followed. Reader's interactions 3/5Comments are less according to the reads book got. Book cover 4/5 *3/5 *its a very common and basic cover, make it a little more attractive.* The cover is a lil bit dim. But good. Description 4/5 Description is perfect. Not too much more too less. And it also makes me really curious to read the story of jjk and y/n and know what will happen at the end. Book title 5/5The tilte given by author perfectly fits the story. Social msg  3/5This story give us msg of love and hardship. Book plot 9/10The book plot is really good and interesting. I really enjoyed reading this. It makes me more curious as chapter goes by. Grammar/vocabulary 18/20Author wrote everything really well. And the words chosen were also good. But still author needs to update their vocabulary. Twist/Attraction 9/10 The story really attract readers towards it by its plot and the twist in it. Character development 8/10Characters are well described And and are not way too blant or active. Creativity/Pacing 8/10 Creativity of the author is really good. But author needs to work on the way of writing (pacing) . My opinion 9/10 The book is really good. Story olot and twist in this story are really attractive and great. But author needs to recheck their spelling and update their own vocabulary. It would be great appreciation if author improves their way of writing. Overall I really enjoyed the story and is looking forward for more great and improved stories from author. Total 85/100 *84/100

Saranghae by 97_golden_baby

Rules 5/5All rules are followed. Reader's interactions 4/5Readers interactions is kind of less according to the reads this book has. Book cover 4/5The cover is really good. But it is too dim. It would look good if it was a lil bit shiny and clear. Description 4/5 Author revealed a lil too much plot in the description. But still the description really made me curious to read. Book title 5/5Book title really suits the book. Social msg 3/5The title itself tells that the book is giving us msg of love and ofc the choice of right person. Rather than this it does not support any strong social msg. Book plot 9/10The book plot is really good. And is very interesting. While reading you'll get more and more curious about whant is going to happen after this. So it also makes it attractive. Grammar/vocabulary 18/20Authors choice of word is really good but still needs to update their vocabulary. Twist/Attraction 9/10 This story have many twist and it gets more and more interesting. Character development 8/10Characters are described well and nicely. But there is a lil lack of emotions. Author needs to work ok it. Author needs to make sure that the reader is feeling those emotions. Creativity/Pacing 8/10The book is written really well. And is paced neatly. Author is very creative. I like the way Author also put efforts to make sure that the reader is understanding every event and clearing there confusion. My opinion 8/10Book is really good. And I enjoyed reading this book very much. But I would like to suggest author to work on her writing a lil, the way she writes it, recheck everything and make sure that she wrote it full of emotions. Total 85/100