⌦𝗕𝗘 𝗬𝗢𝗨𝗥𝗦𝗘𝗟𝗙 𝗔𝗪𝗔𝗥𝗗𝗦 [CLOSED] 2020

✨KNJ REVIEWS!✨

Judge: -WEMBLEY

Book: Taste of fear btsinstagirlfictions

Cover: 5/5 *3.5/5 Title: 5/5 Description: 5/5 Readers interaction: 4/5 Rules: 5/5 Social messages: 4/5 Plot: 8/10 Grammer: 17/20 Plot twist & attraction: 9/10 *8/10 Emotions & character development: 10/10 *8.5/10 Creativity and way of writing: 9/10 My opinion on book: 9/10 Total: 90/100  *86/100

Comment on book: All the writers are really amazing and very good. The theme of this book and the plot was one I would love to read for a while. Like the other books it showed emotions and reactions of people. I hope she/he writes more books because they are really good, she's a good writer! 

HR: please don't hate me for revising the marks, I'll love to not revise the marks once more chapters are uploaded. I hope you understand💜

Book: Without you by AkankshaReddy0623

Title: 4/5 Cover: 4/5 Description: 5/5 Readers interaction: 5/5 Rules: 2/5 Social messages: 3/5 Plot: 8/10 *7/10 Grammer: 19/20 Plot twist & attraction: 8/10 *7/10 Emotions & Character development: 9/10 Creativity & way of writing: 9/10 My opinion on book: 10/10 Total: 86/100 *84/100

Comment on book: The book is very nice and shows raw emotions of a person. The book understands the human emotions and shows every single person is human if they smile and pretend they don't care all the time, people truly do hurt. She/he's a good writer with emotions and I would love to see more of his/her books! 

HR: Hmm there was a rule of having minimum 8 or at least 6 chapters *wiggles eyebrows* haha it's alright but only 3 chapters and the book ended...the chapters were short too...but again *sigh* it was a heart warming one :') try to write rather long books 💜

Book: Regret by JImoumiN

Title: 5/5 Cover: 4/5 Description: 4/5 Readers interaction: 3/5 Rules: 4/5 Social messages: 4/5 Plot: 9/10 Grammer: 18/20 Plot twist and attraction: 8/10 Emotions and character development: 8/10 Creative and way of writing: 8/10 My opinion on book: 10/10 Total: 85/100 Comment on the book: Once again the books were very good and wonderful. She/he was good with words and how to manipulate the words to turn then into his/hers. I would love to see some more works by this person. 

HR: The dialogue delivery is amazing✨ You can use the italics and bold options at places, it gives the book a better look to read at, especially during plot twists and revelations.

judge  y25_bts_luv

Book: ʙʟᴏᴏᴅ ᴛʜʀᴜsᴛ | ᴋ. ɴᴊ (ᴅɪsᴄᴏɴᴛɪɴᴜᴇᴅ)

Author: sarang_bangtan7

Current reades: 190+Category: Kim Namjoon. Marks: Total: 78/100
For Following rules: 4/5 (Did not mention in Conversations)Reader interaction: 5/5 Cover: 4/5Description: 4/5
Title: 3/5Social Message: 4/5
Plot: 7/10
Grammar/Vocabulary: 18/20Plot twist/Attraction: 7/10 Emotions/Character development: 8/10Creativity/way of writing: 7/10Your opinion on the book: 7/10

Strong point: Grammar and vocabulary

Weak point: Putting out events into wordsThe book title does not seem to match the book's content as far as I've seen. The book plot is a bit confusing. There are only limited chapters and that makes it hard to judge. The blurb is not so satisfying, it seems too short and uneventful. It's mostly a part of the story and dialogues. The plot seems to be a bit uneventful too. But the grammar is impressive.That's all. 

Book: Y/N's Secret Fanboy
Author: The_Tallest_Dux

Category: Kim Namjoon Current Reads: 440+ Marks: Total: 83/100
For Following rules: 5/5 Reader interaction: 5/5 Cover: 4/5 Description: 4/5 Title: 4/5 Social Message: 3.5/5 Plot: 8/10 Grammar/Vocabulary: 18/20 Plot twist/Attraction: 8/10 Emotions/Character development: 8/10 Creativity/way of writing: 7.5/10 Your opinion on the book: 8/10 Strong point: Grammar Weak Point: Writing Style The first chapters are a bit uneventful. The blurb needs some work. The blurb is what attracts someone to read a book. Too much information in a blurb is not good. The blurb of this book gives a complete idea on the book's main plot. The writing style is a bit crowded. Other than that, the plot is unique and that is wonderful. The spelling slips are almost non-existent and thank you for following the rules:) 

HR: the book could've got a third prize, just consider the judges advice and isn't the cover a little too full? Like try to use bold text for the title.

judge: fSnowFlake

Eyecandy, wasn't I? by namjoonah22

Total: 75.5/100 *85/100

Rules - 3 Reader interaction - 3 Book cover - 4 *5 Book description - 3 and a half (Description is too long) Book title - 4 Social message - 1 *3 Book plot - 8 *8.5/10 Grammar and vocabulary - 17 *18.5/20 Plot twist - 7 *8 Emotions and character development - 7 *8 Creativity and way of writing - 6 *8 Opinion - 7 I'm no one to comment on someone's hardwork.... but the only thing that's a bit out of place is the way of writing.....like you know if you translate Hindi into English as it is it sounds weird so that is something the writer needs to improve other than that I don't think there's something...

HR: the book is a good one, I'm looking forward to have a read. 💜

trapped by  Blushylilbunbun

Total: 79/100 *86/100

Rules - 3 Reader interaction - 2  Book cover - 5 *4 Book description - 4 Book title - 5 Social message - ___ *2 Book plot - 7 Grammar and vocabulary - 18 Plot twist - 7 Emotions and character development - ____ *6/10 creativity and way of writing - 6 Opinion - 7
My opinion on it is like the writer needs to indulge their reader in it's book like there are 1.4k reads but there's barely any comments so that's the only thing he/she needs to look after.

HR: just missed a win *whispers* maybe next time It'll win one. I'll give it a read whenever i get time. Great work! 💜

Thank you judges and participants! 💖💜✨