Hii guys...
I hope you all are doing well and good...
But I don't know why I feel you people are losing interest in the story..And I felt so because Last part of my story received less votes than the previous parts...
So it's my request Please do comment your views in the comment section below...it will help me to understand whether my story is on right track...!
This time I have tried to use less english as suggested by WolfieCandy5206...!
Hope I could make it work too🤞
Anndddddd For now let's jump straight into the story....
Here we go....!
Scene shifts to CID bureau..
"Yeh kya hai Pankaj , kitni mistakes hai files me.....Ab kya yahi kam reh gya hai mera tumhari files me se mistakes nikalana..? , thoda to seriously kam karo, itna time hogya tumhe join kiye hue still persistently tumhare kam me mistakes nikalati hai, you know what galti meri hi hai har bar tumhe kuch nahi kehti hu isliye tum me koi improvement hi nahi hai..."Purvi places file hardly on table in irritation.. where Pankaj looks at her with sad and embarresed face..
"so..sorry Purvi, aage se nahi hoga" .. Pankaj says somehow in low tone..
"Wow fhirse Sorry, pankaj jitna tum sry bolte ho na har bar galtiyan karne ke bad , use thoda hi bar tum un galtiyon se sikh lo na to mera na adha headache khatam ho jayega"Purvi says in complete irritation look.. she turns to go, without caring that all others looking at her with wide open eyes..
She was abt to move out when shreya enters inside the bureau and both friends collide with each other.. Purvi who was already very much irritated, throws a frustrated glance at her and just moves out.. shreya in complete confusion came inside and looks towards all..
Isay kye ho gaya..? Shreya asked in confusion from all..
"Pata nahi Shreya.. Freddy uttered in confused tone... Subha sa he ukhari ukhari lag rahi hain.. Filhal to Pankaj ki class lagi hai aage na jane kis kis par Purvi ka gussa barasane vala hai.....
"Oh god...! jis tarah ka aj Purvi ka mud hai lagta hai kavin se hi jhagda hua hai..... Yrr itna pyar krte hai ek dusre se fhir itna ladte kyu rehte hai "and she stops after realizing what she said. Smile appears on all other's faces..
Few minutes later...
Purvi entered back, walking fiercely... Seeing her everybody dispersed, back to there places... as Nobody wants to be victim of her anger....! 😂
She came to her desk and saw her phone but there were no traces of any call from Kavin...
"Acha ji itni akad maine call nahi kiya to tum bhi nahi karoge, yeh konsa tarika hua ....Jao me bhi tumhe call nhi karungi Kavin" ...She banged her phone on the desk in anger...
And started working on her laptop...
After every 5 minutes she would check her phone to see if there is any call...
This continued for like an hour ..
Later on..
"Yrr aise to kam me bhi man ni lag raha"
She took her phone and scrolled one of kavin's pic...Staring it she said "You know what I hate you so so much kitne bure ho tum ek call nahi kr skte....And kitne chant bhi ho me chahe kitna hi naraz ho jau bas ek smile me mujhe mana lete ho aur me me kitni stupid hu hamesha tumhaare behkave me ajaati hu" "Please call me I really need to talk to you..."
She again kept her phone back in disappointment...
10 seconds later..
"Usne call nhi kiya to kya hua me to kar skti hu, pyar krte hai ek dusre se aur pyar me kesa ego"she said to herself dialing Kavin's number.....
Other side
Coincidentally Same time Kavin was also calling Purvi...
So the phone's didn't connect
"The number you have dialled is currently busy"
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