WRITTEN: 01/25/23
um, yeah, this was a 'in the moment' kind of a song that i wrote... i'm not proud. i was pretty self-inflicted, i was an idiot tbh... in reality, i let HER down. sorry-
** outdated explaination
this one was difficult to write, as i just wrote and wrote. i just wanted to pour it all out, as songwriting and music is the most therapeutic thing for me. i've been listening to billie eilish, halsey, the weeknd, miley cyrus, girl in red and alessia cara for the past few hours and i just love music sm <33 ( that reminds me, i'm going to listen to ava max's new song next )
i wholly reccommend 'you let me down' by alessia cara. it's free therapy. other songs off her latest album are literally free therapy ( box in the ocean, clockwork, voice in my head, fishbowl ). 'growing pains' would be a good song to go before 'you're on your own kid' by taylor swift too.
OH, SO ABOUT THIS SONG-
yk when someone let's you down, but completely disregarding that, you still care so much for them. it's literally so stupid, and you'll go through slight self-loathing because of it. logically, it's so wrong, but in your heart, it's right.
" move on " nah, i can't, but i'll try. THIS IS ME TRYING-
ah, well, cheers to 2023 :) because . . . i'm loving it! last year, i hated heartbreak, knowing better, changing etc. and i just wanted it to go away, but now in 2023? like, it's so inspiring and i'm writing songs like crazy! I. LOVE. IT. all of this is my songwriting fuel 🔥
btw shout out to @whereveryoustray because in a way, she helped write this song. let me explain-
so i was looking back to 'bittersweet' and the comments, as i was planning on referencing to that song. i saw @whereveryoustray 's comments and i was like " this is good, i could literally write a verse with this " and i did. her comments inspired some of the bridge and the first line of the 2nd verse.
uh, i'm out of time to continue thoroughly explaining my songwriting process, so i'll shut up now. song says it all, as always ✨💙
INTRO:
i literally hate myself right now
why did i write this? ( just, why?)
1ST VERSE:
though it was just a song
i swore i'd die for you
and you told me you would too
i'm not selfish, i know you've got issues
but this bullshit is no longer blithe
and i don't know what to do
so i'm reaching out, terrified
message in a bottle, no stop sign
PRE-CHORUS:
i can't even recognize
whether loving you is wrong or right
it's been such a long time
well, i'm not giving up without a fight
yeah, i'm not giving us up without a fight
CHORUS:
and all i wanna do
is melt with your cold heart
so allow me to prove
that i'd still welcome you with open arms
eventhough you've torn me apart
i never thought you could break my heart
and since then, my world's been dark
eventhough you've torn me apart
i'd still welcome you with open arms
2ND VERSE:
we all have those days
don't we, babe?
the kind when i can't even recognize
whether loving you is wrong or right
hasn't it been such a long time?
well, i'm not giving up without a fight
yeah, i'm not giving us up without a fight
so blow me away, high up the sky
leave me electrified
slit my love with a blade
you said it yourself, we're not over
so quit playing these games
CHORUS:
and all i wanna do
is melt with your cold heart
so allow me to prove
that i'll still welcome you with open arms
eventhough you've torn me apart
i never thought you could break my heart
and since then, my world's been dark
eventhough you've torn me apart
i'll still welcome you with open arms
BRIDGE:
its literally so stupid, this feeling of needing closure
when we're clearly not yet over
someone please get me off this rollercoaster
round and round, always the same
levitate me towards the ground
i've dealt with enough heartbreak
i hate pretending like that
when you're driving me mad
oh, you wouldn't understand
how pretending like that
when you're driving me mad
was never in my plans
BREAKDOWN/PRE-CHORUS:
i can't even recognize
whether loving you is wrong or right
it's been such a long time
well, i'm not giving up without a fight
yeah, i'm not giving us up without a fight
CHORUS:
and all i wanna do
is melt with your cold heart
so allow me to prove
that i'll still welcome you with open arms
eventhough you've torn me apart
i never thought you could break my heart
and since then, my world's been dark
eventhough you've torn me apart
i'll still welcome you with open arms
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