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House of Vampires: The New Wife

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The story takes place in a world where vampires secretly coexist with humans. The main character, Brynleigh Callaway, is a human who is eighteen, and her life is about to be turned upside down. Her family has forged a deal with a prominent vampire f...

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Thoughts, Questions, Concerns?

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by MagPieWrites

by MagPieWrites

Hey guys!!!

I just wanted to start by saying hey and that I hope everyone is doing well.

Now, this is my first story so bare with me lol.

I want to know your opinion on a few things:

1) Is the story moving too slow or too fast?

2) Is there any suggestions or something you would like to read?

3) Who is your favorite vampire and why?

4) Is there something you dislike?

Just answer them honestly, not meanly. Give me your opinion and reasons why so that I can revise or add.

Thank you all for reading my story and I hope you have enjoyed it thus far!!

Any comments that I may have forgotten to mention or you would like to say, go here!!

Thank you!!